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Blood Whistle

Discussion in 'Internet Fiction/Fanfiction' started by Ms. Mowz, Nov 27, 2022.

  1. John_doe26

    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Oh god why did you bring that up? It's the 2nd worst thing in the 2017 reboot story, besides the shitty redesign JC did of the villain.
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  2. ICanFeelTheCosmos0704

    ICanFeelTheCosmos0704 friend of little cat

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    yeah, I don't remember seeing that
    what's worse - a beloved family member dying, or seeing your favorite video game character get savaged repeatedly and all you need to do is stop playing
    hard choice, LOL
    Mario is a very kid friendly video game, but he does get hurt or even die during the game, even if it's not disturbing
     
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  3. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    I mean, playing devil's advocate, but maybe he wasn't super close with his grandpa. Maybe the grandpa lived far away or something

    Not that it isn't shitty, it still is.
     
  4. ToroidalBoat

    ToroidalBoat wat

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    In the Super Mario Galaxy games, Mario can fall in a (scientifically inaccurate) black hole, and you can see him get "spaghettified" doing so. That could be disturbing.
     
  5. Ms. Mowz

    Ms. Mowz My likes mean absolutely nothing!

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    JUNE 13TH, 2012
    It is ironic indeed that today is June the 13th. The unlucky number, the unlucky day. I suppose today isn't completely horrible. Today is the last day I had to play this wretched game. This horrifyingly absurd remake of what I used to see as a wonderful game will soon be out of my life. Along with everything else. With this being the last post, I suppose I can finally be honest about my true intentions ever since I finished world 2. I'm going to take my own life.

    This game has caused me sorrow on such an ineffable level that there is no other option. Life will never be the same. Mom and dad, I love you. Michael and Kelsie, you guys be good. Listen to mom and dad. They have a lot of valuable lessons to teach you. Lessons that I learned but can now never apply again. Now for what you seventy five thousand followers read this post for: the rest of the game.

    Hell itself is what the game brought me to. I suppose that this was intentioned to convey world 8. No, not hell. WORSE than hell. Bodies were chained up in the background enduring a myriad of tortures. The only pain wasn't strictly felt from injuries though.
     
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  6. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    I like how he says June the 13th is ironic, I mean, dude, you wrote this story, you made it that way. That is how I feel when people make up fitting or funny names for characters and talk about how fitting and funny they are, like, dude, you CHOSE those names for your characters, this isn't like real life where you don't choose your last name typically.
     
  7. The Scrunkly

    The Scrunkly would YOU scrunkly the when?

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    I don't know why I didn't think of this earlier, but if playing this spooky romhack was so traumatic, why play the whole thing start to finish?
     
  8. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    yeah, I mean, nobody is forcing you to play. Maybe sunken cost fallacy but still
     
  9. John_doe26

    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    It's almost like the protagonist is a melodramatic moron who should be locked away in an asylum.
     
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  10. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    Seriously, he is blaming the game on everything, but it is really his own fault, like it or not kid, but people and in this case things aren't responsible for your emotions and how you react. Saying this made him suicidal isn't taking responsibility for his choice to play the game.
     
  11. John_doe26

    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Yeah he's an idiot for sure, also the author of this wrote other creepypastas, which is shocking considering how melodramatic and shitty this one is.
     
  12. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    What are his other creepypastas like?
     
  13. John_doe26

    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    He apparently plagiarized from other people's stories, but don't take my word for it, here's an archive of his stories on the trollpasta wiki:
    https://trollpasta.com/wiki/Category:Dubiousdugong
    There's also rumors going around that he was banned from the creepypasta wiki for posting gore.
     
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    The coughs, dying wheezes and vomiting in the background reeked of pestilence and suffering. Fires emblazoned certain people as well. The flames had an actual burning quality to them. Not like regular 8-bit fire. Flesh, eyes, and other internal organs and tissue constituted the walls and ground. If the hell I'm certainly going to exists, I think it looks something like this.

    Mario stood before a possessed Princess Toadstool. Her dress was ripped in several places and splattered with blood. Her eyes gleamed red, the flames casting an evilly maniacal allure to her appearance. Bowser and his six sons were tied to wooden poles with terrified looks on their faces. Wendy, for some reason, didn't appear anywhere in this game. In one hand, Peach brandished a sizable dagger. In the other, the Blood Whistle. She walked over to Bowser and looked him in the eyes.

    Technical limitations slightly hindered the interpretation of what events passed, but it was easy enough to understand what was going on. Through his gag, Bowser pleaded with her not to harm him. She brought the knife close to him and he froze up. He was obviously paralyzed with fear. Her mouth got close to his ear and text rolled along at the bottom of the screen, conveying the text of what played out given the sound limitations. This is what enabled Mario to "speak" in the past.
     
  15. Ms. Mowz

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    "Sh," she whispered.

    Bowser's innards spilled onto the floor in a great heap. He let out a monstrous 8-bit roar of pain as this happened. Peach laughed, her red eyes reflecting whatever evil had possessed her. The princess proceeded to eviscerate all six of his other sons. Mario did nothing but look on in horror as his mortal enemies were torn apart by a woman he had once loved very much.

    His face soon contorted into one of loathing. He had come all this way to find out the very girl he wished to save had been taken over by an extra-terrestrial evil. An evil that would not only haunt Mario, but me as well. The sort of evil that doesn't go away when you turn off the game. The kind of dark force that follows you to your bedchambers and steals your soul. Princess Toadstool paused for a couple of seconds, then came at Mario with the knife.

    "Hey there Mario," she said as she toyed with the knife.

    "They got a little sharp with me so I pushed them over the EDGE! Hehehe…"


    I tried to move Mario but nothing happened. He stood there, afraid of what she would do. She brutally slashed open his arms, legs and abdomen. Shortly thereafter, the princess produced some salt from her billowing dress and sprinkled it all over him. He screamed again, unmoving.

    "The Princess Peach you used to know is long gone. The power of the Blood Whistle consumed that girl and made way for me. And speaking of which," she continued as she produced the Blood Whistle, "Here it is. Hear its cry."
     
  16. ICanFeelTheCosmos0704

    ICanFeelTheCosmos0704 friend of little cat

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    this is getting more demented
    it's getting more and more 2edgy4me
     
  17. Fialovy

    Fialovy Skeleman Warrior

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    Hmmmmm.... why wasn't Wendy in this creepypasta anyways? I don't blame her, though. I wouldn't want to be in this shit
     
  18. Ms. Mowz

    Ms. Mowz My likes mean absolutely nothing!

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    With a mocking kiss on the cheek, she began to play Mario the perverse song of the Blood Whistle. Its notes rotted away the last reserve of good in me. He was heaved by an invisible force into the flames.

    He cried out as they consumed him. Peach chucked the whistle, making it strike him directly in the heart. He continued to wallow in utter anguish as she walked away. As she laughed, He looked into my eyes and bore me this parting message via the text at the bottom of the screen:

    "Do not let your life be as painful as mine was. I do not hold reservations against you, as you tried your best to keep me alive. I commend you for that. Good bye, Bradley, and good luck." The tune of the blood whistle continued to play as the screen panned out of Mario's hell.

    How he knew my name is Bradley continues to befuddle me. How he could have such depth, such personality. I don't know whether this is a result of the game being as haunted as it truly is, or the fact that someone's could have been captured inside of this rom. Whatever the reason of this, of everything that has come to pass with this abomination, I am glad I'm finally done. I have made all of my goodbyes at the beginning of this post. I hope one of you takes the time to save this blog. Or at the very least, to show the world the true hell I have put myself through. I sure hope that the demented creator of this game isn't festering in the same hell I'm headed for. Goodbye, everyone.
     
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  19. Ms. Mowz

    Ms. Mowz My likes mean absolutely nothing!

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    AFTERMATH
    This blog was the last recorded statement of Bradley before his death.

    His roommate discovered him four hours after he made the last post. Bradley committed suicide using a recorder that he plunged through his trachea.
     
  20. ICanFeelTheCosmos0704

    ICanFeelTheCosmos0704 friend of little cat

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    suicide by recorder, that's a new one
    https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/16738440/
    apparently people have killed themselves by choking on handkerchiefs and toilet paper, but no word about using a recorder
    "While reports of suicide by smothering and strangulation are common, suicide by choking is far more rare."
     
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