Chris asked for stories, I delivered

A while back Chris asked for fan ideas so we could do hir job for hir s/he could be inspired. The criteria was clear, no major violence, must be TV-Y7, must be about Sonichu or related characters, and any new villain must be magic or tech inspired. So, under the pen name "Pibotnic," I wrote a quick (compared to everything else I write.) story and sent it in, I have received no response, and it doesn't involve LGBT so consider it dead, so I'll share it, so here it is.
I have to break it into parts due to the character limit here, but who's surprised, I write fucking novels here sometimes.

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"Punchy, Angelina and the Serpent King."
Part 1:
Angelica and Punchy are walking around the mall hand in hand. Angelica stops and looks at bunnies at the pet store.
"Aren't they precious gifts from the Lord?! I would love a little fluffer around the church." Angelica said.
"Man, I don't know, my last 'pet' was too much." Punchy replied, remembering his former disaster of a roommate.
"Perhaps you're right Punch, maybe I should think about it for a while and not buy a living thing on impulse."
An "excuse us" is heard and Punchy and Angelina notice two men hauling the dark mirror down the stairs.
"Woah, I didn't think the mayor still had that thing?"
"Yes sir she did," one of the men said as they placed the mirror down to speak to them, "Crystal wants it out, the mayor agreed, the plan was Goodwill originally, but we don't think anyone should have it so we're taking it to the volcano at Sunstone island to destroy it."
Angelica looks deeply into the mirror, "It'd be a shame to destroy it, it's so, pretty."
Punchy looked shocked, "Ange, you know that thing is dangerous! The only option is to....what are you doing."
Angelica touched the mirror and her hand was sucked in, Punchy grabbed her other hand and they were both completely sucked in.
"Aw man Aw man!" One of the haulers said, "we gotta get the mayor to transform and get them out. Wait, be careful oh no!"
The men lost their grip and the mirror fell and smashed against the floor."
"SUGAR! It's going to take hours to piece this back together, call the mayor and get started, we gotta get this back together as soon as we can, I hope those two will be OK for a while."

Part 2:
Angelica wakes up in a strangers bed, "Oh, you're awake, we were getting worried." A young woman with red hair and green eyes stands by her. Angelica gets up, "Yes, I'm fine now, but I haven't a clue where I am? And Punchy? Where's Punchy?"
"You fell from the sky like an angel, I found you and took you in. My name is Di'andra, you can call me Dia. This is the town of D'harhk, the capital of D'harhklahndia. I don't know what a Punchy is, but you're all we found."
"Well thank you for helping me, but I must go find my partner Punchy."
"You're in luck light one, all of D'harhklahndia must meet today at the foot of the mountain, perhaps someone found your Punches and will bring her there."
"It's Punchy, he's a male, and that sounds wonderful, let's go."
"Not now, but soon. I must change to the ceremonial dress of the D'harhk princess. It is our way. Please, wait outside."
Angelica waited outside, thoughts storming through her head.
"This is a capital city!?" She thought looking at the small farm town.
"The Princess lives here?"
"Why are they having a ceremony now, it's night."
A horse drawn carriage behind her startled her, inside the carriage, Dia was waiting. "I must go now, you ride with me, yes?"
"Yes thank you."
Angelica got in. Dia was wearing a green gown adored with gold.
"You look confused, you have questions, yes?"
"Yeah, why is the ceremony at night."
"It is not night, it is noon. The sky is purple, did you not see? Purple for day, black is night."
"Wait, the sky is never light?"
"Light? Like you? No, never. Is that how it is where you are from?"
"Well, yeah. The sky is light blue during the day and dark at night."
"Interesting, I would like to learn more, perhaps after the ceremony."
"So you're a princess, your father is the king."
"No, my father was a soldier, my mother a seamstress."
"So, how are you a princess?"
"Every 100 years a princess is chosen in every town, the most beautiful woman becomes princess. That is why we meet today, all the princesses stand at the mountain. This is our way...We are here now, you must get out, the rest of the people will be here soon."
"Thank you Dia, I'll talk to you after the ceremony."
"I hope so, I would like that."
Angelica got out of the carriage.
"Angelica!"
"Punchy?"
Punchy jumped out of another carriage and hugged Angelica. "You're OK!"
"Yes I'm fine, and you?"
"I'm alright, I fell on the ground and couldn't find you but I got saved by the princess! Crazy right?! She told me that everyone had to be here today so I could find you, and here you are!," Punchy waved back at the carriage, "Thanks Aliah! I'll see you after this thing!"
A dark skinned woman with black hair and piercing red eyes in a red gown smiled at him, "I hope so, I would like that."
"Strange," Angelica thought, "Dia said the same thing to me? They hope they can talk to us again? Why wouldn't they be able to?"

 

Spoiler

Part 3:
"These two pieces fit!"
"Finally!" The two haulers were trying to piece together the mirror.
"Good job boys!" Christine cheered, standing by the frame of the mirror, "I think the outside is fixed, that was the easy part. Magi-Chan, news?"
Magi-Chan was meditating nearby. "I can't reach them, all I can sense is that they are together and safe for now."
"That's good." Christine sighed, the sooner we get this together the sooner I'll get them home."

Part 4:
Everyone from D'harhklahndia had arrive. The seven princesses, including Dia and Aliah were on a stage. Punchy noticed how quiet and nervous everyone looked. Before he could say anything everyone gasped as two massive purple winged Serpents flew over the mountain, a cloud of purple smoke filled the stage and two men appeared, with grey scaly skin and purple eyes. One wore a crown of burnt iron. He spoke to the crowd.
"YOUR OLD KING IS DEAD! I AM THE NEW KING! REJOICE! AND NOW FOR THE CEREMONY, TO FIND THE MUST BEAUTIFUL PRINCESS TO MAKE MY QUEEN! IF I AM PLEASED, YOU SHALL PROSPER!"
Angelica looked horrified, "What?! Do these women even have a choice?" She was shushed by an old woman next to her, "Quiet strange one! This is our way."
The Serpent King walked in front of Aliah, examined her an smiled, "A fine woman from Ioletia, fierce as the fires of the earth, Ioletia has done well, a warm summer and bountiful harvest awaits you, step forward girl." She nodded and stepped forward.
The next girl wasn't so lucky, a mousy looking girl with an orange dress and brown hair. The King grasped her and threw her backwards. "DISGUSTING! Is this the best Australatina can do! Your winter will be long and harsh, many will starve."
Begs for mercy and forgiveness could be heard scattered through the crowd.
Angelica watched in disgust, as the king rewarded the towns of the women he found beautiful and cursed the towns he did not. After the first round of judgement only Dia, Aliah, and one other girl had stepped forward. "Today marks the new reign, and though these three women are beautiful enough to be my queen, I must only choose one." He pointed to Dia, "I have selected Di'andra of D'harhk, come to me my bride."
Dia stepped forward and offered her hand to the Serpent King, he grabbed her and bit her neck. She screamed in pain and fell to the floor.
"That's it!" Punchy rushed the stage and punched the Serpent King. Angelica flew to the stage to help Dia.
"Please, white one, leave us alone. This is our way." Her green eyes turned a sickly purple.
The Serpent King smacked Punchy aside, "Listen to her, strange ones, it is done. She has my venom in her now and will die in this air, she must return with me to the mountain top, if she leaves me she will die. I shall leave behind my brother, the general, to stop any possible rebellion."
Angelica stood by helpless as the Serpent Kind grabbed Dia and disappeared. The general stood at the stage, pointing to a flag halfway up the mountain he said, "I'll be there, if you want to fight, so be it. If you go after my brother, you'll have to get though me first."
Another poof of smoke and he was gone.
Angelica wiped away tears "And ya'll are OK with this?!"
"This is our way." One in the audience spoke.
"Well....well, well your way is WRONG! Women aren't...things to be judged and taken like autumn apples. You can't curse entire towns because you didn't find one woman beautiful enough."
"The Serpent King is powerful, we must..."
"NO!" Yelled Punchy, "The king is mortal, his father died so he can die, if he can die than he can be killed. You're the people, the leader should fear his people, not the other way around! Who's with us!"
Silence.
"I am with the strange ones." Aliah said. "You speak truths, truths that we have been blinded from by fear for too long! In Ioletia, we are warriors! We fight, and if we don't fight now, why fight at all? Strange ones, tonight, meet here! I must change into better clothes to fight."
"Aliah? Are you serious?" Punchy asked.
"Yes red one, not only am I the most beautiful woman in Ioletia, I am also the strongest warrior. Tonight, yes?"
"Yes."

Part 4:
Punchy and Angelina didn't leave, why would they? They had no place to go. The sky turned black,
"It's night now," Angelica said, "Do you think she isn't coming?"
"You would think wrong then." Aliah scared them.
"Gah!" Punchy jumped.
Aliah wore a red sirwal and a tube top, across her back bore two spears. Golden gauntlets and greaves protected her arms and legs and was engraved with falcons with ruby eyes.
"You have plan, yes?"
"Yes." Explained Angelica, "You and Punchy will distract and fight the general, I'll fly straight to the king."
Punchy finished with, "Once the General is dealt with, we'll hike up and meet Angelica at the top."
"This plan is good, we are ready, yes?"
"WAIT!"
A young man dressed in red armor with a sword and falcon shield ran to them.
"T'analdo! Go home!" Aliah snapped, "My father couldn't stop me and neither will you!"
"I am not here to stop you, I'm here to fight alongside my princess."
"Hah! You? This isn't childhood training. This is dangerous, you might fall."
"So be it, if I die, I die fighting alongside..." T'analdo trailed off.
"Alongside?" Aliah questioned.
"The woman I love."
"The what?!"
"Aliah, warrior princess of the Ioletia clan, I love you. I always have, when you were declared princess I went home and wept. Yes, a man from an Ioletia wept over a woman? Unheard of, but it's true, the thought of losing you to the Serpent King made me sick, now you wish to fight, I wish to fight and die for you, my one true love."
Aliah blushed, "I, I, I."
Punchy interrupted the moment, "Are we ready or not."
Aliah got herself together, "Yes. Let's go."
"I'll stay back," Angelica said, "When Punch yells 'Go!' I'll fly up."
"Yes white one, good plan."
Aliah, T'analdo, and Punchy began the hike up, Angelica stayed a moderate distance behind. When they reached the flag, the general stood by smiling.
"I must say I'm surprised to see you, I thought only cravens made up D'harklahndia.
"Shut it!" Yelled Punchy, "Aliah, T-man, are you ready! GO!"
As the three lunged at the general, Punchy saw Angelica fly through the air, "Good luck Ange." He whispered.

Part 5:
Back at the CWCville mall, Magi-Chan gasped, "PUNCHY IS FIGHTING! I can sense it."
"What!" Christine exclaimed, "This is bad, alright boys. Time to hustle, we have to get this together NOW!"

 

Spoiler

Part 6:
The General grew wings, a well thrown spear pinned him to the wall. He receded his wings in pain, "Horrid wrench, Ioletia will..."
Punchy kicked him across the rocky slope, T'analdo bashed him with his shield back to Punchy. Aliah jumped on and over his head to retrieve her spear. She pointed it to the General on the ground. "You were saying?" She smirked.
The General swept her legs from under her, as she fell he bit her neck.
"Aliah!" Yelled Punchy.
"No!" T'analdo cried as he drew his sword and struck the general's back, his hide was too strong and the sword shattered on his back.
The General got back up and smacked T'analdo to the side.
"Red one, a shame for you. You riled up the people, and now one will die, this girl will die without being at the mountain top soon, and it appears I'm the only one who can fly."
"You monster I won't allow this I-"
Punchy glowed white, from his back, large red-feathered wings emerged, the spikes on his hands grew twice as long. A fire-red aura surrounded him. He screamed once again, "I won't allow this!" and punched the General, he flew against a wall and turned into a small purple garden snake, T'analdo grabbed one of Alaiah's spears and plunged it into the snake.
"We did it red one. But, how did you become a great falcon?" He said.
Punchy grabbed Aliah's limp body and flapped his new wings, "No time to explain, I gotta get her to the mountain top NOW! We'll meet you up there." and flew towards the top.
"Good luck red one, and thank you."

Part 6:
Angelica flew to the mountain and saw the massive castle of the serpent king. The white moon shone over the tallest tower. The towers window emitted an light. Angelica flew in in a rush. "Dia! Dia! Where are you?"
"White one? Why are you here? Dia looked like a monster, her red hair remained, but her skin had turned grey and her eyes were the same color as the Serpents.
"I'm here to defeat the King and free you and everyone of D'harklanhdia!"
"I... what are you?"
"Allow me to explain." The kind stepped out of the shadows. "Strange one, I know where you're from. Understand our history, yes?"
"Fine!" Angelica relented, she thought to herself "This will give Punchy and the others more time."
"Very well," the King explained, "700 years ago, a man from your land, a god to ours, Count Graduon, created a dark land and its people, this became our land of D'harklanhdia. He was battling a worthy foe, you may know him as the chief of the Cherokee. Before he was trapped forever he gave part of his power and soul to a snake, that snake is my ancestor, and trusted him to rule the people. For 700 years my blood line has done just that. Once, my father had to deal with a girl like you, a human who could turn into a strange orange one. Fearful of what she could do, he banished her to the Plains of Daspairic, where she stayed." He then held up his hand, "now I shall do the same for you." A blast of purple light shot towards Angelica. It struck her, but she didn't disappear. Her body glowed white all over. Then her wings turned a vibrant gold, the spots on her cheeks turned to golden flames, a halo appeared over her head and a long golden sword grew from her right hand. She had evolved, she had become ArchAngelica.
"What?" She said to herself, "I've evolved? This is perfect!"
"Serpent King!" She yelled, "With the holy light of the Lord on my side, your days of oppression and fear end right here, right now!"
A massive swing of the sword send the king against the tower wall. He struggled to stand, realizing this was his end, "in my final breath, I curse this land, I curse these people to pain, suffering, and death for eternity."
"You will not!" Dia exclaimed, "You forget not-so-dear husband, the power of the Serpent royalty flows through me! Whatever you do, I'll undo!"
"Ange!" Punchy flew in with Aliah. "It's ok Aliah, you made it."
Aliah stood up, strong again. "I am fine now, and ready to fight."
"The Serpent King smiled, "Kill me and the land is doomed forever!"
"Then we will not kill you, Aliah, warrior princess of Ioletia, will you assist me?" Dia asked
"Yes, my....queen?"
"Hold my hand. The serpent power is in both our veins. Together..."
"N-no!" The kind exclaimed.
"We banish you to the Planes of Daspairic!"
"NNNOOOO!" The kind disappeared.
"Now," Dia and Aliah raised their hands, "A blessing to the land, long may the harvests be plentiful, the summers long, the winters gentle, and true love to reign." A flash of white light blanketed the land, the King was no more, the fear was over.
Dia and Aliah lowered their hands, the curse on them was lifted as well. Their eyes changed back to their original colors and Dia's skin lost its grey scaly appearance.
"Aliah!" T'analdo finally met up with the rest.
Aliah smiled at the rest of the gang, "And now that I don't have to fear an arranged marriage, I can be with my true love." She kissed T'analdo.
"What a precious moment." Angelica said quietly, Punchy agreed and held her hand.
"Punchy! Angelica! I've found you."
"Mayoress?!"
"Yes," Christine explained, "When y'all got sucked into the dark mirror it shattered, I've been piecing it together with help from the boys, I'm here to rescue you from danger, but everything seems ok. Woah, you've evolved too!"
"Yes it was a trial, Ill say that." Angelica said, "I think we're ready to go home."
"Strange ones." Dia asked, "Will we ever meet again?"
"Oh, I think so. Punchy, I think we should keep the mirror at home, with our super bodies, we should be able to come and go as we please."
"Well, ok. An inter-dimensional magic mirror is less trouble than a pet." He laughed.
"If y'all are ready, let's go."
"Wait, strange ones, you meet at the mountain base in a moon from today, sundown yes?"
"I think we can do that, but why?"
Aliah looked at T'analdo and blushed, "New rulers, new ceremony."
"Alright then, we'll be here" and they departed back home.

Epilogue:
"That's good." Angelica dismissed the nuns and Bananasaurous from helping mount the mirror in the bedroom. "Ready Punchy?"
"Yeah, I'm excited lets go." He evolved into Falcon Punchy and they flew into the mirror.
Both airborne, they flew towards the mountain, "Angelica, I must confess, I never knew flying could be so great."
"Yes, and now that you can evolve freely with that stone, you can fly with me always."
They arrived at the mountain base, the crowd cheered as they flew on the stage, there Dia, stood holding a new crown, a golden crown with a falcon with Ruby eyes and flames along the edge.
"Ah, you made it strange ones, it is time."
Dia addressed the crowd. "PEOPLE OF D'HARKLAHNDIA! THE SERPENT KING WE FEARED FOR GENERATIONS IS NO MORE. HELP ME WELCOME THE NEW QUEEN, ALIAH OF IOLETIA AND HER KING, T'ANALDO!" The crowd cheered as Dia placed the crown on Aliah's head.
Hours past and the people celebrated with a massive feast and dance, Angelica and Punchy finally got to talk to their friends.
"Strange ones, thank you for all you have done." Dia bowed.
"Yes." Queen Aliah said, "You showed us what's most important. No more will we live in a world of fear, misogyny, and forced marriages, now we live for prosperity and true love. If you ever need an ally in your battles, know that you will always have friends in D'harklahndia."

END

 

This isn't shitty enough for Chris, it has too much plot!

 

I'll take that as a complement, thank you.
I'm also beginning to think T'analdo is a wee complex for Chris, being a man who shows emotions and cares.
Also Aliah might be too earth shattering because she's, you know, black.

 

It is a compliment, I think it'd work well as a plot for a kid's show or comic, which is the intention. But as you said, no transgenderism or lgbtq stuff so Chris would never want this

 

I thought we weren't supposed to interact with Chris.

 

We aren't, but the temptation is pretty hard with this one. I think we can forgive Pibot, especially since chris will not use this or reply.

 

I kinda figured it was "No trolling," but I see your point. I'm not calling to yell Julay, I wrote a harmless story. I've never contacted Chris before and I'll probably never contact Chris again. I just thought it'd be fun to write a wholesome Sonichu story since Chris invited anyone to do it.
Basically, Chris was asking for it, look what she's wearing.

 

I would kill to see Chris include this line in an issue.

 

I'm pretty awesome tho

 

Now imagine Chris coming to that realization!