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Sonic.exe + it's sequel, Round 2

Discussion in 'Internet Fiction/Fanfiction' started by John_doe26, May 30, 2023.

  1. John_doe26

    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    I changed my mind, I will continue sometime tomorrow
     
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    Judgesaturn507 rambling without substance

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    Ah yes, Sonic.exe, the patron saint of 'only scary if you're 11 years old'.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Welp, it's time...
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    When Robotnik landed onto the 3rd hallway, I noticed he now looked really creeped out, though he tried to hide it, I couldn't blame him, I was scared too.

    Suddenly, Sonic popped right in front of Robotnik the same way he did Knuckles and then red static. The red static lasted for about 15 second and then it showed me a most unpleasant image...

    The image showed a hyper-realistic of Sonic standing in the darkness where you can only see his face while his head and torso faded into black, and when I say hyper-realistic, I mean like he looked so real you could actually see the lines in his blue fur, as if you could actually feel the fur if you touched the screen.

    His face...oh god, he had the most horrifying smile I had ever seen.

    And that's saying something considering I saw that image at the start of the game.

    His eyes are wide and black and once again crying blood (Which also looked hyper-realistic) and there were two small glowing red dots in those black eyes staring RIGHT AT ME, as if staring into my mind. His grin was wide and demonic, it literally stretched to the sides of his face like a Cheshire Cat except Sonic had fangs, VERY SHARP fangs, much like the Werehog's teeth except more vicious-looking, somewhat yellowish and from the look of it, he had stains of blood and small bits of flesh on his lips and fangs as if he ate some animal.

    I stared at that gruesome image for a good 30 seconds, never taking my eyes off it, I felt as if he was actually looking at me, smiling at me...that face, it just took 10 seconds for it to etch itself into my brain for good.

    Then the screen flickered with red static again 3 times, and on the 3rd time I heard the Kefka laugh, except this time it sounded distorted, demonic even...

    It went back to the image again except this time there was the text again though it was messed up, but it was pretty much one of the most horrifying things I looked at since I had this game...

    "I AM GOD."

    It was when I read that message while looking at Sonic when it hit me, I realized right there and then.

    This Sonic was a monster, a pure evil, sadistic, all-powerful, nightmarish, demented monster... and all of his victims, including Tails, Knuckles, Robotnik and possibly Kyle, are just his little toys, and the game is the very gateway into his chaotic, nightmarish world and the very Hell his victims are trapped in.

    The image most associated with the "I AM GOD" scene was made by a 14 year old kid who I will mention more about later.
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Suddenly in an actual split second I screamed as Sonic lunged at the screen screeching loudly with his mouth wide open to an unnatural length revealing nothing but a literally spiraling abyss of pure darkness before the red static came again, this time much louder and distorted, so loud that it hurt my ears, I yelled and grabbed my ears as the red static screeched for a good 7 seconds.

    Then it stopped and showed nothing but black screen.

    As I sat there staring at the black screen, one last text came up.

    "Ready for Round 2, Tom?"

    The Kefka laugh, now sounding more clear as if Sonic was right behind me, played again 3 times as I looked at that text in shock and confusion.

    Then I got booted back to the main menu and this time the third save file had a TV image of Robotnik in the same, tormented state as Tails and Knuckles; Robotnik's skin turned a dull grey, his mustache drooped and had blackened, his glasses broke and blood is coming from them and he had a mere dead like expression on his face.

    I looked at Tails, Knuckles and Robotnik and I cried a bit, I pitied them for the agony they're going through, they were forever trapped within the game, forever tormented by that horrid hedgehog, and always will be.

    Then the computer shut itself off, I couldn't turn it back on no matter what I did.

    I sat there for maybe 25 seconds, horrified by what had just happened...

    Sonic is the very embodiment of evil, he tortures people who play his game in more ways than one and then when he gets bored he drags you into the game, literally drags you to Hell, where he can play with you always, as his toy....

    I can't get the game outta my computer. I think it's stuck in there, but at least I managed to turn it back on now.

    After I sat there for 25 seconds I heard a voice right behind me, like a whisper...

    "Try to keep this interesting for me, Tom."

    I turned around to see where the voice came from, and what I saw made me scream...

    Sitting on my bed... staring right at me...

    ...Was a Sonic plushie, smiling with bloodstains under its eyes.

    The ending part with the plushie was allegedly ripped off from another crappypasta, Pokemon DEAD channel. I say allegedly because it's never been a 100% confirmed, though given how the sequel "borrows" from other creepypastas it wouldn't surprise me.
    Never mind, I just found out that Pokemon DEAD channel was made in 2010, while this story was made in 2011, so JC definitely ripped it off.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Updated the recent note because of some info I just now found out, I highly recommend rereading it.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Alright so I'm gonna take another break from this thread, but before I do I'm gonna post the infamous freakout JC had when this joke of a horror story got deleted.
    ATTENTION ALL FELLOW SONIC.EXE FANS.

    I deeply regret to inform you all that I received some bad news.

    The Admins of the Creepypasta wiki have finalkly decided to delete Sonic.exe offa the wiki, on the grounds that it was "badly written" and "had too many cliches" and "was a bad example of what should be a creepypasta".

    BULL.

    FRIGGIN.

    HORSE SHIT.

    As you can see I am FURIOUS with the fact that my masterpiece, which has won the hearts of millions and has made a massive impact on the internet, is being brought down by a bunch of jealous, arrogant, retarded FURRY-HATERS.

    BUT.

    That does not mean I am just going to sit down and take this lightly.

    NOOOOOOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE.

    They have been messing with the bull, and now they've called out the horns!

    Listen everyone, I need your help with this. We are at WAR here. I want every Sonic.exe fan who is reading this to get the word out! I want you to tell every other Sonic.exe fan out there, every fanatic, every artist, every follower of my creation about this. Tell your friends who are also Sonic.exe fans if they have to! Tell them we have to keep the spirit of Sonic.exe alive!

    Make more fanart, make more videos, block the haters, praise Sonic.exe like you never have before, build websites dedicated to his greatness, whatever you gotta do to keep him alive and strong, JUST DO IT.

    The deletion of Sonic.exe from the wiki is but a minor cut on our flower of greatness, my friends! And that cut has done nothing but further the spreading, and we are the pollen of this flower! We need to prepare for our victory over the Haters! The Haters need to BLEED for their crimes!!

    Rejoice, my fellow Sonic.exe Fans! Our glorious little Hellspawn shall have the laugh yet!

    THIS will be his ultimate victory!

    The absolute subjugation...

    OF THE INTERNET ITSELF!!!!

    The funny thing about this rant is that Sonic.exe did kinda get a fanbase, but most of them never read this train-wreck of an online horror story, rather they got to know Sonic.exe through the game adaption by MY5TCrimson which was mostly faithful to the original story, but added a few secret levels and other easter eggs.
    The game's popularity pissed off JC due to it overshadowing his "masterpiece" and it proved popular enough to get various fangames and fan-sequels of its own, which pissed JC off even more due to most of them deviating from the original story.
    eventually after 2021 when JC left most of the internet (which I will get into after I'm done posting Round 2) people began making their own reimaginings of Sonic.exe, making OCs and stories, without any involvement from JC or his ex-girlfriend, who I didn't mention earlier because she isn't really relevant until Round 2, but again, I'm getting way ahead of myself.
    I will continue on June 12th.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    I'm gonna try looking for some of JC's shitty Sonic.exe art.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    The amount of degenerate fetish art I had to fucking go through to get these isn't even funny.
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    There is more, but I think you get the point.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    On the topic of Sally.exe
    I will not post that story for 2 reasons:
    1. JC didn't write it.

    2. It's a repeat of the first story without any of the funny parts.

    3. The entire story is plagiarized garbage, even the title character and concept of Sally.exe was stolen from the same 14 year old who made the "I AM GOD" image I mentioned in a note earlier.
    This video was allegedly made and posted on YT around 2007 to early 2010, but got deleted and was reuploaded by a different guy.
     
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    Judgesaturn507 rambling without substance

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    WHEN.
    WILL YOU LEARN.
    THAT YOUR ACTIONS
    HAVE CONSEQUENCES?!?!

    wait wrong guy
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Don't worry, JC did face consequences...

    BTW the 14 year old's online alias was Falsecow_, the reason I'm mentioning this just now and not earlier is because I somehow forgot, so whenever I mention them again I will use their alias.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    I just edited the last post with more info.

    I'm also open to any questions concerning the Sonic.exe stories.
    Sorry for posting too much.
     
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    The Scrunkly would YOU scrunkly the when?

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    JC's sonic.exe removal rant is one of the all-time classics of internet "cringe," for lack of a better term. It's hard to believe that someone who was an adult actually wrote that.

    I heard somewhere that the author of sally.exe got creeped on by JC himself, which adds another level of horrible to it. I'd also like to point out that sonic and sally are written to about the same standard and yet the author of the latter was 14, while the author of the former was an adult at the time.

    Honestly, sammyclassicsonicfan actually mellowed out as they got older and is actually a pretty cool person from what I hear. (That's to be expected, because they were an actual child like wtf)
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Actually, JoresuOni (aka DriftStar), the author of the Sally.exe story and Falscow_, the 14 year old who designed and created Sally.exe, are 2 completely different people. JoresuOni stole the character and concept from Falsecow_ and also stalked and harassed them.
    Falsecow_ was the one who got creeped on by JC but I will go into more detail on that situation after I post all of Round 2.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    I'm bored as hell so I'm gonna post the first part of Round 2.
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    Sonic.exe: Round 2

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    It's been more than a year now ever since the "Sonic.exe Murders" began to happen, and the police department STILL doesn't know who's doing it or why it's happening. The first murders looked as though the killer did a sloppy job at it, but overtime the killings--or at least some of the guys back at the station THINKS it's just killings--have gotten more elaborate; bodies have been starting to look like the victims just dropped dead or there were disappearances. ONE thing is certain, all the victims seem to each have a burned/destroyed computer with some data from a game called "Sonic.exe".

    None of us have found any connections or clues that could help us learn why all of this is happening...Well, no, that's not true, there was one cop who may have uncovered more about the murders than we did.

    The guy's name was Derek Green, a really good detective, mainly because he was always teamed up with his sister, Chelsea. They were assigned to investigate the "Sonic.exe Murders", I should know because I was their boss at the time.

    They're both dead.

    Sometimes I wonder if I should have helped him....I dunno...Anyways, the boys have found Derek's diary when we investigated his apartment, he hasn't been in his home for weeks. The diary recorded all of what Derek found in his investigation, my god, did he write down alot, especially after the Chief of Police took him off the case, and alot of what he wrote down seems to cconnect alot about what's going on with these murders... At least, I hope he was on to something... Here is what Derek wrote...

    This story, for some godforsaken reason has a lot more grammar errors and misused words than the first one.
    I don't how you could get significantly worse at basic grammatical skills, but JC has somehow found a way.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Had to edit a previous note because I said the first story was made in 2012, when it was actually made in 2011.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Bored again.
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    7:30 pm September 15th, 2011

    Happy Birthday to me! I got this diary as a gift from my sister, Chelsea. This will certainly come in handy when we both do another investigation. Oh, I forgot to tell you, name's Derek Green, I'm a detective...Wow, I'm not rly good at this. Hopefully I'll get better as I write in this. Anyways, I'll let you know if anything else happens.

    11:22 am October 24th, 2011

    Wow, pretty interesting way to start off a case on Halloween. Our boss told us there's a stiff in one of the local suburbs and he wants us to check it out. Wow, been a while since me and Chelsea tackled a murder case, this might be interesting. We're in the truck right now and we're heading for the house.

    2:30 pm

    Jesus...Whatever happened in this house I was not expecting. The victim looks like something ripped his mouth open and tried to yank something out from inside. I've seen alotta messed up ways to kill a person, but this is rather strange, I don't rly think any normal person would do this.

    The cop present at the crime scene told us that the kid was like this for 2 days and his parents just discovered his body and called us in this morning. What's rly weird about this is that there's a badly made cut on his chest that's shaped like the number "1".

    Chelsea told me she found a possible clue to the murder. She showed us that the victim owned a computer, the computer is badly burnt and wrecked. Both me and Chelsea have a theory to this: Either the killer destroyed the computer or the victim did it himself, either way we sent it to the station for research.

    6:10 pm

    Alright, the guys from the lab have their report.

    They told us that the computer's wrecked from inside AND out, and what I mean by that is that everything that was on this kid's computer is completely deleted while at the same time the computer got destroyed. The only thing that seems to STILL be in the computer is some data from a computer game called "Sonic.exe".

    And here is our introduction to the protagonist of Round 2, Derek Green.
    Don't worry, he's somehow even more melodramatic and stupid than Tom.
     
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    ToroidalBoat wat

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    looks like that "creepypasta" just drags on and on and on...
     
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    My headcanon says that Derek Green is this guy, and nothing you can say will change my mind on that.
     
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    John_doe26 There was once a time when everything was fine

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    Derek is more of an incompetent imbecile in my eyes, though he is definitely mentally impaired.
     
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