At least Sephiroth actually talks in his games Yes. That is the only reason why Jenna was called a Mary Sue. Can't possibly think of any other reasons behind that. Now you say this wasn't pulled from your head, but honesty, but if it came from your dreams, I think that counts as "pulled from your head". Oh don't worry, it's really not that difficult. I'm sure you will have another lucid dream that could easily explain the details. Spoiler alert: this didn't help. I don't know, those negative reviews have certainly motivated you into writing this rant that could pass as a light novel. Yeah, us mature folks have never lashed out like children over trivial matters such as, oh I don't know, negative reviews of something they wrote. Excuse me, madame, but I believe that these reviews are just deliberately using hyperbole, and I think you might be taking their words a tad too literally. Wait, what? "From the gecko"? Was Gex supposed to inform me of the weird and disgusting contents of your fanfic in-between his movie references and one liners?