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The Sunstone: A fanfic

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  1. Pibot

    Pibot The autist formerly known as Pikonic

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    At the suggestion of @Hellblazer I'm going to move my Sonichu writings here, so far I have Obscurity: Sonichu's finale, this one, and the unfinished Crystal Weston Chandler's Dark Cronicles, which I probably will pick up again after my semester ends.
    I'll start with this one since it's not the dystopian "show Chris as he really is," like Obscurity and it's actually finished, unlike Dark Cronicles.
    When I was writing this in the summer of 2014, Jace "Stryker" "The Commander" "Parkourdude91" Connors and his Deagle Nation was the biggest non-Chris lolcow of the Farms, they're the reason we were called Kiwis. It feels weird posting work about Deagle Nation now, but here we go. Chris was still referring to herself as a "Tomgirl male" at the time so there's no transgender Chris.
    This hasn't been edited at all since the original 2014 publishing.
    The Sunstone Chronicles (Pt. 1)
    Magi-Chan was meditating in his mountain cave when he had a vision. On Sunstone Island there was three men in dark colors standing over an unconscious Flame, making their way to the Sunstone. One of them placed their hands on it when Magi-Chan snapped back into reality.
    He contacted Sonichu telepathically, "Sonichu, no time to explain, you and the combo get to Sunstone Island NOW!"
    "Uh, sure. No problem."
    "I'll meet you there."
    Magi-Chan teleported to Sunstone island and made his way to the legendary Sunstone atop the tall mountain. To his surprise Flame was fine, he was laying on his chair near the Sunstone, no dark clothed men in sight. Magi-Chan realized he'd had seen the future.
    "Ho ho ho hiya Magi-Chan."
    "Hello Flame."
    "What brings you to Sunstone Island?"
    "I had a vision that three men were trying to steal the legendary Sunstone."
    "Ho ho ho ho! Do not worry Magi-Chan! As you see, no men are here. No men. None!"
    "I think they might be coming. My visions are never wrong you know."
    "My family has protected the Sunstone for 600 years, I will protect it. Me."
    "You have all this time, and I know you will continue, but I have the chaotic combo coming just to be safe."
    "I will not be needing it, but I like company."
    Sonichu, Rosechu, Blake and the chaotic combo arrived.
    Sonichu waved, "Yo, Magi-Chan! We took the fastest boat here. What's up."
    "Hohoho! Welcome Sonichu!"
    "We got here as soon as we can!" Bubbles said.
    "Yes," Wild joined in. "But, what's wrong? Everything seems..."
    "Fine!" Punchy was angry, "Magi-Chan, are you fucking with us?! What's the deal?!"
    "The 'deal' is I saw Flame get attacked by men trying to steal the sunstone. It must have been a vision from the future."
    "No worries hohoho! Nobody can take the Sunstone from me!"
    "I did once." Bubbles' husband stood beside her and grinned at Flame. Bubbles smacked his shoulder, "Ow, what? I did steal the sunstone!"
    "And we stopped you." Punchy grinned right back at Blake, "just like we'll stop these guys."
    "Hohoho I am telling you as I told Magi-Chan, I will not be needing the help." Flame stood up and stretched his wings. "I am a sunbird you see!" He flew up above their heads. "We sunbirds have always—"
    POP! Flame hit the ground, he wasn't moving.
    "Heavens!" Angelica ran over to Flame, "F-Flame!" She checked him for blood, he wasn't bleeding. A tiny bronze pellet rolled out from under his feathers. Angelica picked it up, "What is that?"
    "Let me take a look." Angelica handed the pellet to Blake, "It looks like…an airsoft bullet."
    Magi-Chan picked up Flame, "He's breathing, that thing you found must of knocked him out."
    "Yeah, airsoft isn't meant to kill or anything, I used to play all the time. The do hurt like a bitch though."
    Sonichu looked at Flame, "Who'd use an airsoft gun against Flame"
    In the distance, they heard the shooter. "TAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA! We got the little faggot!"
    "Yeah yeah, that's sickness bro!"
    "Hell yeah! TAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA!" The voices were getting louder, whoever shot Flame was approaching.
    Sonichu was always the brave leader, this time was no different. "Rosey, get Flame to his hut! Bubbles, go down the back of this mountain and circle around to the dock! If they try to run away, stop them there. Angelica, stay in front of the rest of us and use Steel Wing to stop those bullets. Magi-Chan, you and Wild stay near the Sunstone. Punchy, Blake." Sonichu had his hands in fists, "We stand behind Angelica, ready to knock these guys out! ARE WE CLEAR!"
    "Yes!" Everyone chanted in unison. Bubbles sprinted away down the mountain. Wild stood near the Sunstone and Magi-Chan floated above it. Rosechu scooped up Flame and ran towards his hut. Angelica jumped in front of the other three, her wings shielding them and herself.
    Sonichu looked at his former rival, "Ready?"
    Blake smiled, "You guys managed to stop me after all, and now I'm on your side. We got this."
    Angelica yelled, "I see them. Here they come!"
    Just like Magi-Chan saw, three men dressed in dark camouflage made their way up the mountain.
    "Wait what? What the fuck is this? That bitch said the fucking bird was the only one protecting the rock."
    "I don't know man."
    "Your fucking leads are always garbage Stryker!"
    "Yo, shut the fuck up. We'll just shoot these faggots down too." The three men pointed their guns at Angelica. "Dust this bitche's ass tahahaa." They fired, but Angelica's wings deflected their airsoft pellets. "What the fuck? This is unrealistic!" They put their guns down.
    Punchy took this opportunity and kept forward, punching the man on the left out cold.
    "THE FUCK THE FUCK THE FUUUUUCCCKKKK?!"
    "I got this Commander." The man on the right pulled out a blue grenade and slammed it down in front of Angelica. It flashed and the sonichus were blinded by a bright light. The two men cartwheeled past the first line of defense. As Wild and Magi-Chan regained their vision, they were knocked aside.
    Stryker placed his hands on the Sunstone, "Faggot! Help me get this thing out of here!"
    The Sunstone broke into seven pieces. Four were shot into the sky. One stood alone on the pedestal. One landed by Blake, and one landed by Stryker. Blake fell onto his piece and pretended to be knocked out. Once everyone recovered from the flash grenade they noticed Stryker and the other were gone.
    "No! God dammit!" Punchy stomped the ground.
    Angelica pointed to the shard on the pedestal, "Guys, look at that." On the shard was another sunbird like Flame, yellow instead of red. He was an older bird with a long grey beard.
    "Hello Blake." The old bird said, "You can get up now, thank you for protecting that piece of the Sunstone."
    "How do you know my name?"
    "Heh heh heh. I am a new face to you but you are not to me. My name is Solairo. I am, well…how do I put this to you? I am the first sunbird. I created the Sunstone and sealed myself into it. I guess you can say I am the Sunstone itself. I knew one day the Sunstone would be in true peril. I knew it would shatter and I'd be released. And here I am heh heh." Solairo looked at the pedestal. "This shard will keep order in this world for a time, you guys need to find the other 5 pieces, one is with Stryker as we speak, the other 4 went north, south, east, and west from here. Find them and bring them back."
    "How?"
    "Give me that shard." Blake gave Solairo the shard he saved. Solairo held in in his wings and broke it into four pieces, he gave one to Blake and the other three to Sonichu, "Feel how hot they are? When you are near other pieces they will be warmer than if they are not near. The closer you are, the hotter they will feel. Time is short. Magi-Chan, you stay here and I'll teach you about the Sunstone and it's prophecy. It will help your friends find the remaining pieces. Others, please bring my pieces back here."
    "Understood." Punchy pointed at the man he knocked out. "What do we do with this one?"
    "Take him to my cave in the mountains, see what kind of information you can get out of him about this Stryker guy."
    "What must be done must be done. You guys can save the Sunstone, you must. Terrible things will happen if you don't!"
     
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    Pibot The autist formerly known as Pikonic

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    I'm gonna have to post this in pieces since there's a limit in how big posts can be, I guess this'll be a re-release every Saturday or something, I'll probably release 2 or 3 chapters at a time, that way anyone reading for the first time doesn't feel overwhelmed with the entire fucking thing at once.
    Stryker and his remaining accomplice ran back to the dock, the Sunstone shard firmly in Stryker's hand.
    "Ok ok ok. We got some of it. The fucking bitch is gonna have to deal with it."
    "Yeah."
    They made it back to the dock and stopped, "Wait what? The fuck man? Where's our fucking boat?"
    "Looking for something?" Bubbles stood waist deep in the water, behind her was a motorized raft.
    "That's our fucking boat bitch, what the fuck?"
    Bubbles smiled smugly, "Correction" she lifted her arms and a whirlpool pulled the raft under water. A large POP was heard followed with bubbles on the surface of the water, "That …WAS… your fucking boat."
    "Fuck this, unload on this bitch!"
    Stryker's accomplice pointed his gun at her, Bubbles fired a jet of water from the ocean and the gun went flying out of his hand. She fired a larger one at his chest, he was sent backwards. She began moving her hands back and forth, the tide began growing higher.
    "Fuck this!" Stryker pulled out a radio from his pocket. "Requesting evac! We need some backup, Malcom is captured and Edison is down! Repeat! Malcom is---"
    "You don't need to repeat yourself!" A strange voice said, it was a woman's voice. What made it so odd was it didn't come from the radio, it came from the sky. "Do you have the Sunstone?"
    "Tahahaaaaaa! Yeah. Get us outta here! This blue bitch is unreal!"
    "Oh, don't worry about her. I may not have much left, but to me she is nothing." Dark clouds formed above the island, a ray of silver light shot through the clouds, hitting Bubbles. She didn't make a sound as she fell limp into the water.
    "TAHAHAAAAAAA! That was SICK!"
    "Yes. I suppose that was quite sick indeed. Now, you two stand close together, I'll teleport you away."
    Stryker and Edison stood back to back and disappeared as the unconscious body of Bubbles washed up on shore.
    "Bubbles!" Blake ran towards her. He picked her up and started shaking her shoulders, "Wake up baby! It's Blake! It's ok, please wake up!" Nothing.
    "Blake!" Magi-Chan used telepathy from Flame's hut, "Get her up here now! Solairo says he needs to see her." Tears in his eyes, Blake brought his wife to see Solairo. Magi-Chan had made a makeshift bed for Bubbles to lie on while Solairo examined her.
    Solairo sighed, "This is not good, she's been struck by moon's glow."
    "Moon's glow?" Blake was kneeling by his wife.
    "Yes, a magical attack, it's used by the Lunnu, a old tribe from my time that drew their power from the moon, like how I draw from the sun."
    "So, what can we do?"
    "Gather the remaining shards of the Sunstone, she will stay this way without it's full power."
    Magi-Chan could see the anger in Blake, "Blake, go home. Get some rest with the others, when I have something about the remaining shards I'll contact you."
    Blake didn't say anything, he left.
    "I need to know more about the Sunstone." Magi-Chan said to Solairo.
    "Yes, but first I need to know what you already know."
    "Flame told us it control how things grow, without it we may grow extra limbs or trees could grow legs and walk."
    " No, it does far much more. 600 years ago, I was once a moonbird and a servant to the Queen of the Lunnu, Serene. Serene was a fair queen over the moon worshipers. One day in her studies she discovered deep under the earth a stone would grant her ancient powers, this was the legendary Moonstone, forgotten over the years. She dedicated three years in trying to find it's location. I watched her, our just queen, become haggard and obsessed with finding the Moonstone. She grew insane over it, the Lunnu let her keep her title as queen, but quickly choose another leader. I stayed by her side as I was her most loyal servant."
    "What does this have to do with the Sunstone?" Magi-Chan grew impatient.
    "Quiet! To understand the Sunstone, you must understand the Moonstone! Queen Serene locked herself in a tower trying to find the cave where the Moonstone was. I brought her meals, cleaned her room, and begged her to stop obsessing over the Moonstone. I feared obsession might kill her. One day she finally left her room, she told me she figured out where the Moonstone was, and I was coming with her. I thought she was crazy, but she was right. In a cave we found a gigantic crystal shaped like a giant cresent moon, it was the legendary Moonstone. When my queen touched it, years faded away and she was the beautiful queen she was once before. I told her we should bring it back home, people would see she wasn't insane after all. She told me no, her home was now this cave, but I should return to the Lunnu. I didn't want to leave my queen, but I couldn't disobey her, so I left. When I made it back home…everyone was dead and everything was destroyed. I ran back to Serene to tell her, she laughed at me. She destroyed my home and killed my family and friends because they thought she was crazy. She told me to leave or she'd have to kill me too. I came to this island. The sky grew dark, I knew it was Serene. I looked to the sky and a sunbeam shot through the clouds and hit me, my feathers turned a bright yellow. I knew I was no longer a moonbird."
    "You became the first sunbird?"
    "Yes. I knew what I had to do. I used all the energy I had to create the Sunstone. The new stone absorbed my body and the sky's grew clear and bright again."
    "So the Sunstone is a balance. It counters the power of the Moonstone."
    "Yes. Without the Sunstone, the sky's will grow dark once more and block the sun, plants will wither and die, animals will starve."
    Magi-Chan had more questions, "What happened to Serene?"
    "Like me, she was absorbed, but by the Moonstone. These stones are alive, they think and they need energy, when the Sunstone was created, the Moonstone consumed her in hopes it could get it's energy back."
    "How do you know this?"
    "Like you, I have visions too. When the Sunstone took me I saw her in the cave with the Moonstone. She grew angry at the loss of her powers, she began slamming her fists against the Moonstone, then she disappeared. Without the Sunstone, the Moonstone will release her again. The shard we have should keep her contained in the Moonstone, for a time."
    "Why did the Sunstone break?"
    "Defense, I couldn't let someone have both stones, so if the wrong person placed their hands on the Sunstone, it would shatter. I hoped I'd be capable of returning the pieces if I had too."
    "Don't worry Solairo, my friends will get those remaining shards."
    "I am thankful. Now, let's go to what's left of the Sunstone, with it's energy we should be able to have our visions of the missing shards."
    Magi-Chan and Solairo left Bubbles and went to the Sunstone's pedestal. Magi-Chan closed his eyes and began to meditate. Minutes later, he found the first missing shard and couldn't be more relieved.
    The first shard was located right in CWCville.
     
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    Pibot The autist formerly known as Pikonic

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    Okay, this chapter requires some explanation.
    You see, when I originally wrote this, Chris wasn't a transgender yet. He was a tomgirl, but he was still professing he was VERY MUCH A STRAIGHT MAN! So i had two options, write him as a tomgirl, as I did in Obscurity, or just leave Chris as Comic Chris. The drawings of Christine-Chan Rosechu weren't out yet and the comics of Robbie's sexual escapades as a lesbian weren't leaked. The only change to Sonichu since it's 2010 hiatus was that Simonla was now alive, and that wasn't in the comic proper, just some Lego and a Facebook post.
    It was assumed, but not known, that in the comic proper, Chris would embrace Comic Chris as a transgender, but at the time as well as to this day, Transgender Chris isn't in the comic proper. This isn't a fanfic of Chris's life, it's a fanfic of Sonichu. A fanfic of Sonichu proper, nothing in this comic, besides the obvious Deagle Nation reference and some Zelda references when the story goes to RuleCWC (spoiling a three year old story here,) comes from anywhere other than Sonichu proper
    Long story short, Chris is a man in this, no trans, no tomgirl.

    "Seriously, in CWCville!?," Sonichu thought the news was too good to be true.
    "Yes," Magi-Chan told him telepathically, "I saw the Jewelry store where a Sonichu Ball was once there. Someone must have found the shard and brought it there. Are you with the mayor?"
    "Yes he is." The voice was mayor Chandler's."Sonichu told me all about the Sunstone and what happened to Bubbles. How is she?"
    "Solairo said nothing will change until we get the Sunstone whole again."
    "Don't worry Magi-Chan. The city's resources are yours, as always. I'll get a helicopter to fly you guys wherever you need to. Do not be afraid to ask for anything. Fixing the Sunstone is top priority."
    "Thank you Chris." Magi-Chan returned to his meditations.
    The Sonichus sat with the mayor in his office. "Alright, we have the location of the first shard, and it's literally right below us. Sonichu, go to Kay's and get that shard here, the rest of you stay put, Magi-Chan could contact us again at any moment."
    "Alright, I'm off." Sonichu left for the jewelers.
    Chris looked around, "Where's Blake?"
    Wild knew the answer, "Chris, Bubbles is dying, It's too much for Blake to handle. He's at their home right now."
    Chris sighed, "I can't imagine what Blake is going trough right now, but I'm going to try to talk to him. You guys stay here and stay alert."
    "Yes sir!"
    Chris drove to Blake and Bubble's house by the shore. He knocked on the door.
    "Piss off!"
    Blake accidentally left the door unlocked, Chris let himself in. Blake was in their living room, the lights were off. He was lying on a couch with a bottle of vodka in his hand. Chris turned on the lights.
    "Ow! I said piss off!"
    "Blake It's me, Chris."
    "I don't care! For the third time. Piss. Off." Blake began to cry, "I don't want to be seen like this!" He vomited on the floor near him.
    "I'm sorry about Bubbles."
    "Yeah yeah yeah, whatever. Just leave me alone."
    "Blake, please"
    "Piss off faggot!"
    Chris remained calm, "Sitting alone in your house isn't going to bring back your wife, but we know what can. Blake, I need you. The combo needs you. Your wife needs you."
    Blake turned his head towards Chris, "Did she tell you?"
    "Tell me what?"
    Blake got up and stumbled up the stairs, Chris followed him. Blake almost fell as he went into another dark room. He turned on the light. It was a pale green room with pastel sea creatures painted on the walls, in the middle of the room was a crib, with an egg resting in it.
    Blake started laughing, "Imma be a daddy! Bubbles was going to be a mommy."
    "I don't know what to say,"
    "Don't" Blake took a swig of vodka.
    Chris took the bottle from his hand, "You going to be a father, you drunk! If you don't want to help the mother of your child, fine. We'll save her for you. You're pathetic Blake, I thought you were better than this."
    Blake grabbed his bottle back, "You need to leave now."
    "Ok fine. I will." Chris left Blake and returned to the others in his office.
    Back in his office, Sonichu has successfully retrieved the shard, it was in the middle of the conference table, the others were congratulating him.
    "It was easy," Sonichu said humbly, "The owner of the jewelry store didn't even want it. He told me some guy found it and sold it to him. He tried to break it into pieces to make a necklace out of it but he couldn't. He said a diamond tip drill couldn't even scratch it. He was so frustrated with it he just gave it to me."
    Punchy laughed, "Ha! Maybe the others will be just as easy, maybe Stryker will just give up his as easily."
    It was good to joke a bit at a time like this.
    Wild noticed Chris had returned. "Sonichu got the shard! Only 4 more to go! Where's Blake?"
    "Blake won't be joining us. He…needs more time.
    Magi-Chan contacted them again, "Chris, how goes the hunt?"
    "We got the first one."
    "Excellent, Solairo managed to see the location of the second one."
    "Alright! Where is it."
    "It's about 50 miles north of Sunstone Island." He paused, "It's at the bottom of the ocean. About a league down"
    The chaotic combo looked at each other, they knew only one member could dive that deep into the water.
    Bubbles.
    Rosechu spoke up,"What do we do?"
    Chris sighed, "I don't know, but we need to think of something."
    Sonichu's face lit up, "Wait! There's another water type! Chris, remember those Sonichus in Minnesota? There's another water type Rosechu there."
    "That's right! Kitty! Nice thinking Sonichu! I'm going to contact her right now."
    "Alright!" Punchy said, "You guys get Kitty and take care of that next shard."
    "Where are you going?" Chris inquired.
    "I'm going to Magi-Chan's mountain. We still have our prisoner, I'm going to find out what he knows."
     
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