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NOTEBOOK SONICHU!!! THE SHITTY LINED PAPER FANCOMIC!!!

Discussion in 'CWC Discussion' started by hm yeah, Feb 13, 2017.

  1. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    alright!!! finally attacking one of my 65749874 billion spur of the moment lined paper comic idea things. this one's about chris!!

    see, lined paper's my thing. i might throw up a few 'somewhat clean and on printer paper and in color' things every now and then, but for the most part it'll be lined paper rough pages, in grayscale. admittedly with very shaky art (in my defense i have kondishunz and a microscopic attention span and i'm very scattered, lazy and impatient. and very easily distracted. winning combo)

    i'm just gonna straight up sacrifice polished art and 'professionalism' in my cwc fancomic in favor of speed and ease.

    side note, also getting refreshed on trickie and blanks' comics! they're great - but i'm a different person with a different way of doing things, so my way of making comics is different. i'm going to probably upload 8 pages at a time. seems to be on average 1.5mb.

    i just looked them over and even though the markers were being disobedient and they look worse irl, they scanned better.

    all that said, here muh kawmik

    (i really hope i stay on this one)

    and yeah it's off to a really rough and shaky start, but i'll get better. i made loads of glaring errors that i caught, but oh well no point in fixing them, i'll just do better next time.

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  2. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    Not bad. So what's this about, exactly?
     
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  3. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    ^ chris mostly. you'll see. that is, you should see if i keep my 5479436th promise to myself that i'd keep up with a project (i probably won't but let's play pretend i have some reliability). i have two series of this planned. 'a' is chris in my very poor concept of ruckersville ('notebook ruckersville' or 'rucky'), and you'll see the rest (hopefully). series 'b' will be based on cwcville. if i make a series b.

    in other words i have no answer to 'what's this about'. it's about my favorite manchild.

    the stories will be episodic, probably vary a lot in length and complexity. i'm trying to be spontaneous, which i'm not very good at so i'll practice that.

    stories like 'chris goes fishing for reel at the mall', and 'chris decides to build a time machine', etc.
     
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  4. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    so i figured when i'm working on working on the comic thing, i'm keeping a dev book and stuff where i work out what i'm learning. i've always gotten horribly confused when drawing topics like complex machines, fences, masses of lines, horrible things like those. hands are also shaking again unfortunately, but i've worked a few things out and here are some drawings for what's coming up. including some background characters we'll be seeing soon.

    if i keep on the project.

    (yes most of these are copied from photos)

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  5. Telefunken

    Telefunken Telefunken

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    This is much better than anything chris has produced.
    You draw sonichu very well.
     
  6. Aggressive Bubble Cat

    Aggressive Bubble Cat "Angry salt water bathed Pussy"

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    This is amazingly well drawn! I hope we might get to see more soon!
     
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  7. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    hm yeah buh ayway

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    hm yeah buh ayway

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    workin on a few things... including some layout/idea/seeing how well i can draw things drawings!

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    okay now i gotta study
     
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  10. Sparklemilhouse

    Sparklemilhouse America Online for Dummies

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    I love the snow shovel part.
     
  11. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    17 pages inked!! yeah i made loads and loads of spatial mistakes. next time i should really lay out a map before i draw up a place. i made all kinds of crazy errors. can you count them all? can you count that high?

    also apparently i'm edgy now. (my drafts change wildly all the time, i swear. you never know what dumb thing will appear on the lined paper)

    http://imgur.com/a/gHfHQ

    FINALLY the images are in order. imgur sucks but it never goes down.

    oh and sonichu's question isn't answered even in my originals, whoops, oh well, they got distracted.

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    i'll bet i'm gonna get super confused and color things wrong when i get to that.

    oh and i bet you could tell i've been having crazy manic/burnout cycles while working on this. never fails me.

    it's obnoxious, isn't it.

    anyway, gonna gray it in and move along.
     
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  12. hm yeah

    hm yeah buh ayway

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    let's change things up a bit (that microscopic attention span thing again).

    let's have chris spend a nice day with silvana rosechu!!

    (yes there are a bazillion mistakes, like one panel where i obliterate human anatomy)

    anyway

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    better get back on the primary one. i put even less effort into these because these are my 'series c' - where i don't even bother to erase pencil (got special markers to use for here) and i scan it at 75 dpi. because i'm just really avoidant and easily distracted.
     
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    This is some good work, even if it is done in a notebook. Keep up the good work
     
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  14. InklingTits

    InklingTits daddy's inkies

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    this is relevant to my interests

    also great
     
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  15. Blank

    Blank The Charles Dickens of Disco.

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    This is absolutely fantastic.
     
  16. JSMK

    JSMK BLOOPITY BLOOPITY BLOOPITY BLOOPITY

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    The art style is pretty interesting. I wanna see where this goes.
     
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  17. BOLDYSPICY!

    BOLDYSPICY! True and Honest Pufferton

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    Bob is the most sympathetic character in this whole thing. I love it.

    EDIT: Sylvana---err, Sylvie's huge forced smile when she claims to be a fan of Sonichu is my favorite.
     
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  18. Red Light Abnormality

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    I like the art a lot, good job!
     
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