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Mary Sue vs. Mary Sue

Discussion in 'Internet Fiction/Fanfiction' started by TheEnderGecko, Feb 10, 2017.

  1. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    Hey. I've been considering creating a Sonichu Fan-fiction for a while now. It would be about a handsome, charming guy who goes out on a Love Quest of his own. Everything actually goes pretty well for this guy until Slaweel the Witch steps in. She kidnaps this guy and begins to experimenting on him, as he is the "perfect specimen for [her] latest plan". She succeeds in her scheme, and our main character is genetically altered to have a power similar to that of Amazo. He can use any power another person uses against him. Basically, he's the Mary Sue-iest character I've ever created. So what happens when Mary-Sues collide? I don't know, I'm still working on it.

    Thoughts? Suggestions?
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 10, 2017
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    Stardust Self-proclaimed Ween

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    Do it
     
    Stardust, Feb 10, 2017
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  3. Cyan

    Cyan #00FFFF Staff Member B& AF, Fam Moderator

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    Depends on your sue's personality. Would he be thankful for the powers Slaweel gave him or would he resent her for kidnapping him? (Or both?) Is he patient and understanding or does he not have time for Chris and Sonichu's shit? Does he want to use his powers to help others or only to benefit himself?
     
    Cyan, Feb 11, 2017
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  4. froddy

    froddy Mad scientist with girlbird helper

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    This would be hilarious.
    Go on with it, i want to see this unfold
     
    froddy, Feb 11, 2017
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  5. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    He at first is brainwashed and can't really think anything other than DESTROY ALL SONICHUS, but then he'll hate her. For some reason I'm also thinking I should also have Walsh develop feelings for my sue.
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 12, 2017
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    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    One more thing: Should make the story very dramatic with super descriptive narration?
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 12, 2017
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    Baron_Aurr Well-Known Member

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    Sounds good to me. Just don't write like you're taking it too seriously.
     
    Baron_Aurr, Feb 13, 2017
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    Cyan #00FFFF Staff Member B& AF, Fam Moderator

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    Or do, that's part of what makes sue fiction so deliciously funny.
     
    Cyan, Feb 13, 2017
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  9. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    BTW, I'll put up a link on Google Docs for you all to cringe at, unless you know of a better way to do things.
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 13, 2017
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    Cyan #00FFFF Staff Member B& AF, Fam Moderator

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    Post it to Deviantart?
     
    Cyan, Feb 13, 2017
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  11. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    I'm not that good with art, and I wanted it to be a written story, so I have no reason to post it there.
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 13, 2017
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    Cyan #00FFFF Staff Member B& AF, Fam Moderator

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    You can post written work there too.
     
    Cyan, Feb 13, 2017
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    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    Huh. Didn't know that.
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 13, 2017
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    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    TheEnderGecko, Feb 14, 2017
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  15. Cyan

    Cyan #00FFFF Staff Member B& AF, Fam Moderator

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    Gordon sounds like somebody I actually know IRL. You're going to have to step up the sue game.
     
    Cyan, Feb 14, 2017
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  16. TheEnderGecko

    TheEnderGecko True and Loyal Sonichu Fan

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    I'll do what I can. Also, if you have a Gmail account, you can leave comments over at the Docs page if you want.
     
    TheEnderGecko, Feb 15, 2017
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  17. [WTX]Coolguy_Tran

    [WTX]Coolguy_Tran Extreme Ween!

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    I was hoping this would be a thread where popular mary sues of fanfiction fight to the death.

    Shucks.
     
    [WTX]Coolguy_Tran, Feb 15, 2017
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    this is a pretty good idea, go for it
     
    Deleted User 0007, Feb 15, 2017
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